Post by nickyfanatic on Apr 28, 2007 10:37:15 GMT
Hey dis is my 1st fic av rote in a wile so a mite b a bit rusty... dis is slightly based ob a true story sumfin that personal 2 me... but i luv feedback gd n bad so please leave sum lol xxx
The little boy was running down the street his golden blond hair was bouncing up and down as he ran he came to a halt at the end of the street his blond curtains fell perfectly in place. He crossed the road and onto the park where he took his favorite place; sat in the middle of the climbing frame where he could get the view of the other streets and the people who lived there. The little boy loved to spend his time on the park especially when the girl came he loved to tease her he knew she was something special if only she would say yes. Well he did not care how long it would take he knew that she would come on the park when she came and visited her grandad all he had to do was wait.
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The little girl had long chestnut brown hair and a face with a few freckles this was the thing that made her stand out. She was getting ready to go to her grandads and also that meant she could go to the park again and the boy would be there not that she liked him at all he was annoying and always fussing around her all that she was thankful for was that she did not live there and did not have 2 see him everyday. If only she knew what was round the corner.
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The little girl's face lit up as she saw the familiar surroundings. She loved going to her grandad's as she always got spoilt. The car swerved around the final corner and the park which Zoe spent most of her time on whilst she was staying at grandads came into view and who should be there but little Jamie. Zoe faced turned crimson she couldn't believe he was there at this time. As the car drove by Zoe could not help herself but to look out of the back window and as she did she looked directly into Jamie's sparkling blue eyes.
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Jamie was sat on the climbing frame bored he knew she was coming today he just didn't no when. He loved it when Zoe came up because he use to tease her in a friendly way and they would enjoy the time they spent together but then she had to go back home and he was bored. Sure Jamie had his own friends but it was never the same. If only Zoe lived near him they could become best mates and one day get married and have children of their own. Just as his boredom was beginning to overcome him and make him go back home he saw the familiar red corsa car. The smile on Jamie reached from ear to ear as he saw her he couldn't wait till they were playing on the park tomorrow. As the car drove by he saw Zoe look out of the back window and directly in to his eyes. Yep Jamie knew these next couple of days were going to be the best of his life.
The little boy was running down the street his golden blond hair was bouncing up and down as he ran he came to a halt at the end of the street his blond curtains fell perfectly in place. He crossed the road and onto the park where he took his favorite place; sat in the middle of the climbing frame where he could get the view of the other streets and the people who lived there. The little boy loved to spend his time on the park especially when the girl came he loved to tease her he knew she was something special if only she would say yes. Well he did not care how long it would take he knew that she would come on the park when she came and visited her grandad all he had to do was wait.
***
The little girl had long chestnut brown hair and a face with a few freckles this was the thing that made her stand out. She was getting ready to go to her grandads and also that meant she could go to the park again and the boy would be there not that she liked him at all he was annoying and always fussing around her all that she was thankful for was that she did not live there and did not have 2 see him everyday. If only she knew what was round the corner.
***
The little girl's face lit up as she saw the familiar surroundings. She loved going to her grandad's as she always got spoilt. The car swerved around the final corner and the park which Zoe spent most of her time on whilst she was staying at grandads came into view and who should be there but little Jamie. Zoe faced turned crimson she couldn't believe he was there at this time. As the car drove by Zoe could not help herself but to look out of the back window and as she did she looked directly into Jamie's sparkling blue eyes.
***
Jamie was sat on the climbing frame bored he knew she was coming today he just didn't no when. He loved it when Zoe came up because he use to tease her in a friendly way and they would enjoy the time they spent together but then she had to go back home and he was bored. Sure Jamie had his own friends but it was never the same. If only Zoe lived near him they could become best mates and one day get married and have children of their own. Just as his boredom was beginning to overcome him and make him go back home he saw the familiar red corsa car. The smile on Jamie reached from ear to ear as he saw her he couldn't wait till they were playing on the park tomorrow. As the car drove by he saw Zoe look out of the back window and directly in to his eyes. Yep Jamie knew these next couple of days were going to be the best of his life.